Pitch Feedback Analysis

In this post I will be going over the feedback that I had gotten from doing my pitch in front of my peers. I did this survey not only to get feedback on my actual pitch but to also get feedback on the pitch itself so that I could make corrections to it as part of my problem solving.

First I began by asking the audience questions about my pitch itself as this felt like the most important questions, mainly because my pitch was still fresh in their minds when they were taking the survey so I wanted them to be able to give me accurate feedback with this in mind. Seeing as those taking the survey were all within my target audience I figured that I should ask if they actually enjoyed the ideas I showed in my pitch as if they didn't enjoy my ideas I would have to change them so they fit the likes of my target audience but thankfully the unanimous vote was that my audience enjoyed the ideas that were pitched to them. I then went on to ask if they felt my idea was suitable for both the client and the target audience. I felt their answers would be of help to me as they were all aware of who the client and the target audience are for the documentary and thankfully they all felt that my ideas were in fact appropriate for those two factors. Thanks to these answers I didn't have to alter my actual ideas at all, which was relieving due to the time we had to complete this product.

 

After asking the necessary questions about my ideas I then went on further to ask just how appealing my idea was to those who had viewed my pitch and I asked them to score my idea on a scale of one to five. The majority of those who took my survey felt that my idea was a four out of five which I feel is more than good enough however seeing that forty percent of my audience felt that my idea was in fact was a five out of five was an extremely lovely thing to see as it meant that some people really did like my ideas and after spending so long on them, it was a sort of relief.

From here I moved on to asking questions about my pitch itself as I wanted to see if the audience felt there were any corrections I would have to make on my actual pitch seeing as this was a very important part of my coursework and I wanted it to be at the highest standard it could be. I first asked about the positives of my pitch in the eyes of my audience so that I could have both positive and negative opinions on my work. The main positive seemed to be that they liked my pitch as it was detailed and my ideas were more unique than others they had seen from my peers which I appreciated. I then asked if they themselves felt there was something I could improve on when it came to my pitch and despite the majority saying they didn't there was anything, forty percent of my audience thought I could improve on something so I went on to ask what they actually felt I could improve on. What I got back was that they felt I could add more detail by speaking on what I planned to do for the structure of my documentary which I kept in mind when I went on to make a correction of my pitch/a second version of it.